My names Louis and I live in Iowa.
NOBODY CARES ABOUT LOUIS IF THEY DON'T KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT HIM!!!
So how do you make your reader care about your character?
Louis was your average 12 year old,
walking home one night without a care in the world.
He was minding his own business
when he suddenly tripped
and fell into a deep hole.
He felt like he'd never land,
and he wondered where he would end up...
Do you care about Louis anymore now?
Pause the video and answer the following question. What would make you care about Louise more?