elements of a story rubric
point of view
The point of view for this story is about theird person point of view This is with the words that are used for theird person view are like he,she and it.
theird person point of view
This story will be about people trying to find their way to school so they ask for directions so that they would not be late for class and it was their first day of school. So on her way to school she got lost because she did not know where she was walking to because it was her first day of school so she was not use to walking to school by herself without an adult.
Dramatic Question from the story
So she was getting in role for school because she just moved to mount pleasant and she also was not use to walking to school by herself because she was also scared walking to school because of the people that live around that would try to convince young children. She also did not want to go to school by herself by walking there because she would be scared and she does not know what happens on the way there and it would be very frightening her and she would probably never ever want to walk to school again by herself if she gets to frighten by the people that are in Mount Pleasant.
Then one day some weird guy drove up to her and ask her if she needed a ride to some where and she stared at him for a while and she told him no I will walk there to school. Then she started to run as fast as she can until she found the school and when she got there she was tired and she was out of breath where she was about to have a asma attack because she did not had her inhaler on her and that point because she did not thought of any of the guys would go up to her and run for the school when she was very frightening at the time where she would be out of breath and need some air for her to breathe because she wouldn't be able to without her inhaler so the next day she took with her to school and she had a note and she gave it to the office and it was for if she needed it when she cannot breathe.